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                                    Day to day one will wonder:
                                        What happens now?

Will I go before those and impress?
                        Or fall and submit to all?

                                                        Knowledge builds, experience gained,
                                                                yet all life remains.

Love beings, love ends, love triumphs,
                faster
                        and
                                faster thoughts fly
                                
        What is real? What do I feel? Why does it hurt? Why do ask?
                        My emotions are my own.
                        My thoughts are shared.

                                                        Never! NEVER! Don't ask! Don't care!
                                                Pain envelopes, anger builds.
                                        Time is short.
                                    No patience.
                                Need answers.
©2008-2009 ~lcshaver06
:iconlcshaver06:

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Poem on the word "Puberty" as requested by samhatie94 - [link]

This is an experimentation with spacing and also a completely different writing style. I thought it might be appropriate to try this out over the given word.

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:iconsamhatie94:
puberty? more like contemplating suicide. JK but this is a really great poem

--
~You havent lived
until you've found
something worth
dying for~

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March 26, 2008
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